Might make you cry this one!!

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    Might make you cry this one!!

    A Poem
    (*deep sigh* Shall we begin)


    Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
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    I think ive got *sniff* something in my *sniff* eye
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    i think u got somethin lined across a mirror :D. that was sad as fuck tho *sniiiiiiiiiiiiffff*
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    why today?

    im having a bit of trouble controlling my emotions....i cried watching a birth on discovery health and now im crying watching holby city and reading this

    whats wrong with me?? im not sad im just very tearful :confused:
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    *Passes Helen box of Kleenex* :)
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    By the way av just noiced that was my 100th post (trumpets play) i am well proud of myself to make it past 100 posts,so i'd like to thank my mam and dad for buying me a ben sherman shirt when i was 15 and turning me onto a ben sherminator for a year before i actually realised they were shit.My grandma for giving me them hard boiled sweets every time i go round, and My Cat,Sid,for dying and leaving me £2000 and a bowl in his Will.Al miss u m8.(oh and my G/F for puttin up wiv me,al get wrong if i dont mention her,fluff)
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    bosh wif a box of klennex whats he been up to?!?!?!?

    :rolleyes: ;) :p
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    eh?! Aint there enough s***e without having to hear more?
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    a found it,a read it,a liked it,a copyed it,a pasted it a, a posted it,You decide what u think.

    An@rchy did u actually see me @ shindig when a txt ya?
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    see, even this thread got round to sex in 8 moves, well done cyberted :D:D:D theory well and truly proven
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    A bit to depressin for me. Pass those Kleenex:( :(

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