open slaughter

open slaughter

almost ready to put a tune ive been messing with to bed - ive been working on it for about a week and i'm starting to go around in circles

i've heard it so many times i could do with some help pointing out the obvious

so if any of you have (less than) 3 minutes spare and want to lend a hand i would appreciate it

the best way to to point out anything you don't like is to leave a time to go with your hate, so i have an idea of what you mean

Jason Cole - Running Away (beta)

thought this was gonna be a pharcyde remix

I like it Jay.
Its very summery.

I'd maybe filter the vocals a little bit more on the break if thats possible.

thanks for taking time to listen Jimmy

what part would you describe as the break, what time does the vocal sound like it needs more squashing?

When there's no kick.
It just sounds a little bit empty at that point.
I might be wrong like.

aah, do you mean at 1.37 add more vocal earlier on to fill that gap?

That's exactly what I mean jay

wicked mate, i'll get on that soon as

i've heard the thing on loop so many times now i cant see the wood for the trees

I like the vocal.
Where's it from?

Four Tops - You Keep Running Away [1967] (Motown Records)

Quality.

updated version to check if anyone has a minute - still looking for the obvious pointers please

i put it on zshare so it can be streamed easier for people

[ame="http://www.zshare.net/audio/1723062238c0b7fe/"]zSHARE - jason cole - running away betav2.mp3[/ame]

What style/genre is this mate?

i havnt made one up yet - open to suggestions, but im going with 'pop' for the minute

its house tempo, with a motown hook, and a shadey sounding electro-ish synth

Its good that, very catchy. Is that your first effort if so thats pretty impressive? What programs did you use to do it?

thanks for listening matey, appreciate it

it still feels like it needs more doing to it, but might end up finishing a couple of versions - full vocal and a dub kinda thingy

thanks for checking it out mate

not my first ever effort, but i wouldn't say i'm seasoned at it - a lot more production in there than i originally set out to do

im using ableton to do it in

Jase i think this may even get played over the bank holiday weekend

hey mate, thanks for listening, appreciate it - i can try and get a tail on it by the weekend if you need something to mix out with?

That would be awesome Jase cheers for that